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Old July 24th, 2008, 04:06 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Love Mistaking provokes heart breaking

Rosa, You have never known true love
Just what you assumed it was
Your heart at first was embraced
But the love
Was erased
Suddenly selfishly replaced with hurt when they pushed and shoved
Now you need more then, just trust, honesty and a hug
Remember me? We were addicted Sweetie like drugs
We was together in a different world
Fake love entered you gently the physical should have been much more mentally
You and I would last infinity times 20 centuries
But in this 20th century you was not sent to me
Eventually you shall remember Baby for we were meant to be
We lived together in bliss in a world prior to this
That is why your lips part, you smile and your eyes glow
Each time you read my poetry flow
You feel like "its something about this guy that I feel like I know," damn have we met before?
But you tend to equate love with pain because of ills that fake lovers dealt
Memories of them should be now like promises that are seldom ever kept
Hence that is why your heart wept
The essence of love begin within yourself
Of that missing puzzle I am the last piece left
Which suddenly seem to have crept on scene?
From the access memory of your computer screen
Though we may momentarily dream
Your and my dreams are stirred with our poetic words
That if taken whole heartedly will compel us to react upon our verbs
I thus observe your beauty throw 60 million thousandths of a second and picture what would it be in reality to have you touching me
While I penetrate the center of your body with actions verbs
That are felt when they are heard
Because you seem to understand me better than most of those of former wars
Every day, we are torn away from the ones that we love
when you are reading this lift your eyes above
Morality provides you strength to resist the inner whisper of the truth
To avoid the lustful passion of just me and you alone joined as one no longer two
This magical moment represent all the time we've spent getting to this day
I had to express this feeling for you that so deeply lay
I keep them at bay
There's no other way
If we are whom we claim to be
Then perhaps it takes you to bring forth the real essence of me
Suddenly my spirit descend upon your heart like a dove
And properly teach you ... to love
Ohhhh, no one ever does but this is how we was
After peering deep into your eyes I stall
And see the you that you think you are is not really you at all
Hey Sweetie you are not what you have grown to be
The essence of you is brought back by me
I stand as a man and relay a message that descends to you from God above
If you can't run, walk or jog then crawl to looooooooove
For your definition of love was sadly mistaken
You had an imitation,. Heart breaking hearting aching which is often mistaken for.......... love

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Old July 24th, 2008, 05:19 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old July 24th, 2008, 05:26 PM   #3 (permalink)
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i'm agreeing with the above poster....this is so emotional.
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Old July 24th, 2008, 05:30 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Hmmmm.: Thought provoking on soooooo many levels.

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Old July 24th, 2008, 05:47 PM   #5 (permalink)
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That was really good. You are so right, alot of times we have an imitation of love, even though we all yearn for the real thing.
 
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Old July 24th, 2008, 05:50 PM   #6 (permalink)
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i'm printing this out.
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Old July 25th, 2008, 10:32 AM   #7 (permalink)
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your replies inspire my spirit and provokes encouragement
 
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