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Me & My Pen
Me and my pen,
been best friends since the age 10 where do I begin? I was writing in big chief tablets me and pencil my small mind, the only utensil writing about the flowers and leaves i grew up like stuck like old oil spots and hearts that grieve. Went through the average drama as a young man losing my virginity and my mind was that the game plan? Read books that had me shook dodgin the dopeman and trying to find a girl I could put my hope in. Still alone just me and my pen documenting the sin I was in. Having night terrors about fallin daydreaming all about ballin. Back to my pen still I was crawling. Until the day I stopped writing. Closed my pad to deal with demons I was fighting. Took three years before I picked it up again. She never let me down, it was just me and my pen. Now after all this time, scandals and petty crimes, folding paper and counting dimes. I managed to rewind, looking at the paper trail looking at the tears and hearts that I failed. I cannot see just like braille But I feel it and im still here to tell. There's glory though most days it was gory even when the world ignores me My pen still documented the story. Who cares if you dont Who prepares if you wont It doesnt really matter in the scope of things Life's not hard, it just stings. Thank God for poems that sing. They make the sounding music that swings. As for me, I sit home in the late night documenting the struggle and the fight. Because when the day ends. I realize Its just me and pen. Richard J Wright (2008)
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this is a good piece. i like how it tackles the power of writing through the pen. the pen, although lifeless, is a powerful tool when put to use. it moves, creates a revolution. :)
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I luv it. I have not wrote in about seven years. Can't find words to put with my thoughts. Hey poetic, you live in Houston? Any poetry cafe's here?
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well,
there is a few spots here and there. Mocha life down on Almeda in 3rd ward is one. They have open mike night usually once a week. (i haven't been in a long while). West Cafe 5757 on Westheimer has poetry reading still I believe, I think on Wednesday nights but Im not sure. Check Starvingpoets.org, they may have a few spots or events in mind.
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nice piece, poet. it's about time you started writing.
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Still doing it I see,
Great write as always
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poet has been keeping it real...
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