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Old April 26th, 2008, 09:06 PM   #1 (permalink)
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The warmth of a strong dark figure standing behind
whispers imaginations gently into your ear
Words of love, compassion and desire for only you

Wrapped in the embrace of joy as a soft kiss traces your neck,
shivers travel down the spine as shockwaves penetrate
the core of two wanting lovers

The dark silhouette opens the package with ravage aniticipation
towering the gates of pleasures' waterfall
Eagerly seperating the entrance's only obstacles
as they willingly part with yearning

Slowly piercing the core of bliss as exploration occurs in this flower's inners,
the aroma of love fills the atmosphere, the sounds of delight set the mood
offering each other joy's songs of praise

The aroma of sweet passion fills the atmosphere
with wild waves of earthquakes felt by only two
glistening beads of moisture satuarate sheets of roses
and leave evidence of this fierce encounter

Strokes of pleasurable pain travel deep into the abyss of love's depth
with rocks tumbling down the outer gates and grinding firmly against
its cleft, intensity builds as the search for a favorable end nears

With every thrust towards climax the pulsating throbs of rushing veins
intensify the sensations of thunderous motions, voices of increased
excitement break the code of secrecy as wild jargon reveal all

Pounding, crushing, pushing, poking, pulverizing
continuously chasing bliss' conclusion

Tingling, shivering, quaking, shaking

Exploding, Gushing, Griping, Releasing

Lingering aftershocks


Caressing

Sailing into the other's eyes







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Old April 27th, 2008, 06:08 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old April 28th, 2008, 12:42 AM   #3 (permalink)
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The warmth of a strong dark figure standing behind
whispers imaginations gently into your ear
Words of love, compassion and desire for only you

Wrapped in the embrace of joy as a soft kiss traces your neck,
shivers travel down the spine as shockwaves penetrate
the core of two wanting lovers

The dark silhouette opens the package with ravage aniticipation
towering the gates of pleasures' waterfall
Eagerly seperating the entrance's only obstacles
as they willingly part with yearning

Slowly piercing the core of bliss as exploration occurs in this flower's inners,
the aroma of love fills the atmosphere, the sounds of delight set the mood
offering each other joy's songs of praise

The aroma of sweet passion fills the atmosphere
with wild waves of earthquakes felt by only two
glistening beads of moisture satuarate sheets of roses
and leave evidence of this fierce encounter

Strokes of pleasurable pain travel deep into the abyss of love's depth
with rocks tumbling down the outer gates and grinding firmly against
its cleft, intensity builds as the search for a favorable end nears

With every thrust towards climax the pulsating throbs of rushing veins
intensify the sensations of thunderous motions, voices of increased
excitement break the code of secrecy as wild jargon reveal all

Pounding, crushing, pushing, poking, pulverizing
continuously chasing bliss' conclusion

Tingling, shivering, quaking, shaking

Exploding, Gushing, Griping, Releasing

Lingering aftershocks


Caressing

Sailing into the other's eyes







Empathetic Intrusions © 2007 All Rights Reserved
LOVE IT!!!
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Old April 28th, 2008, 05:03 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Nice...like the intensity level. Alot of good detail.
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