Love unending (pt 2)
Old December 28th, 2007, 09:01 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Love unending (pt 2)

I was wrong to hate you, though I'm not alone in my feelings
I am and will always be the father of our first child
I was right in many things and wrong in many others
I was going to tell you how right I am but I would be wrong in doing so
I wasn't right wanting to be with you for sex
I wasn't wrong when I saw it wasn't going to work but
I was wrong in how I handled it
I was wrong telling you to get the **** on
I was wrong in pushing you away with anger and not logic
I was wrong for handling the stress at work by quiting
I wasn't right in doing that after we just had a child
I wasn't suppose to hope that you'd take up the slake, so
I was wrong in hopping you'd take care of home like I did
I was wrong when I told you "you can do what you want to yourself
I wasn't doing right by worring only about the life of my child and not her mother
I wasn't happy with you and I should have opened my mouth before we had sex
I was young and I should have thought better but
I was young with you and for a time was in love with you

And though we have since moved on
And will soon have a fight in court of the one person
We both charish with all of our hearts,

Deep inside I can now say that there is still a ounce of love unending
because you are and will always be the mother of my child

JABOOM

Yeah it's copyrighted 2007
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Old December 30th, 2007, 07:13 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old December 31st, 2007, 10:09 AM   #3 (permalink)
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