Vacant Lots
Old November 20th, 2007, 11:03 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Vacant Lots

Vacant lots everywhere

Prime real estate

Buildings fall

Folks move in

Kids play softball

While just a few feet away

Money placed in a soup can

Waiting for delivery

Rock stars hanging on the corner

Peddling their wares

Not aware

Of the black caprice

Cruising thru

Shots ring out

And babies fall

While Rock Stars

Continue

On

Kids

Continue to play

Walking over used condoms

And

Broken needles

While watching hookers

In gang ways doing their thang

On in a squad car

Bobbing for apples

Vacant lots

This is the spot

The reservation where they put us black folks

Welfare laden and unemployed

Cultivate this lot

And enjoy

Pit bull vs. rats

Who will win?

Playing bball alley style

With a bike rim or milk crate

No rules

While

Sitting in a burnt out car

Dirty old men

Con young girls

Rape

Incest

It all goes on here

For a little scratch

You got to offer up the snatch

Vacant lots everywhere

Enter if you dare.
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Old November 20th, 2007, 11:44 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Thought provoking and compelling. Nice work!
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Old December 3rd, 2007, 09:38 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I Have To Agree With Black....this One Is Very Thought-provoking!
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 props...
Old December 21st, 2007, 11:53 PM   #4 (permalink)
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....NICE! Flow was on point and all that. Nice visuals
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