Adams Rib

[justmeagain]

Distant lands and distant dreams
of two people both unseen,
Entwined spirits,two halfs of one whole,
My long lost self ,my twin soul,

Spititual souls we both seek to connect,
love stretching beyond the eons of time,
i felt like the nignt sky without the countless stars,
the moon,mars and venus pass me by

Once In a land before time,
I cried the ocean ,A thousand times ,
Its me, do you remember your Adams rib,
I’m tired, been soulsearching for far too long,

ive been like a fish out of sea ,
asleep with dreams of a vague memory,
i can feel you getting closer to me,
the sky is charged can feel your electrical energy
like a thunderstorm your commanding me

i kneel in your presence, head bowed down,
you hold up my chin, and say stand be proud,
Joined at the hip, the apple of my eye
side by side, we will walk on by,

deep breaths, the flow of cascading tears,
all of my unleashed countless fears,
dont lose me again, i’ve been so scared,
you just dont know what i have feared,

“ i know,” you say,”felt your pains in my dream ,“
“was there beside you,but had to remain unseen”
“till such a time when God quietly said”
“...become again loves young dream ...“

...do you remember when we played on His knees...?
by justmeagain

[afrocentric]

i sure hope someone hurry up and find you... cuz ur are deep. damn this is what i'm talking about.

[ardamus]

wow, that was good

[Bishop]

Awesomw flow!!!

[poeticasylum1]

this is very nice, and thought provoking indeed.

[justmeagain]

Originally Posted by afrocentric

i sure hope someone hurry up and find you... cuz ur are deep. damn this is what i'm talking about.

i keep getting told that, i'm glad you enjoyed it

[justmeagain]

Originally Posted by ardamus

wow, that was good

cheers hun, appreciated

[justmeagain]

Originally Posted by Bishop

Awesomw flow!!!

Thanks Bishop

[justmeagain]

Originally Posted by poeticasylum1

this is very nice, and thought provoking indeed.

thought provoking ?? Cool

[dlang]

Originally Posted by justmeagain

Distant lands and distant dreams
of two people both unseen,
Entwined spirits,two halfs of one whole,
My long lost self ,my twin soul,

Spititual souls we both seek to connect,
love stretching beyond the eons of time,
i felt like the nignt sky without the countless stars,
the moon,mars and venus pass me by

Once In a land before time,
I cried the ocean ,A thousand times ,
Its me, do you remember your Adams rib,
I’m tired, been soulsearching for far too long,

ive been like a fish out of sea ,
asleep with dreams of a vague memory,
i can feel you getting closer to me,
the sky is charged can feel your electrical energy
like a thunderstorm your commanding me

i kneel in your presence, head bowed down,
you hold up my chin, and say stand be proud,
Joined at the hip, the apple of my eye
side by side, we will walk on by,

deep breaths, the flow of cascading tears,
all of my unleashed countless fears,
dont lose me again, i’ve been so scared,
you just dont know what i have feared,

“ i know,” you say,”felt your pains in my dream ,“
“was there beside you,but had to remain unseen”
“till such a time when God quietly said”
“...become again loves young dream ...“

...do you remember when we played on His knees...?
by justmeagain

Very interesting!!! (DC)