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Old August 10th, 2007, 02:08 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Invisible

You would think as dark as I am,

That I wouldn’t be invisible

That when I walk with you side by side

You would hear the echoes of my silent cry

I raised you, inspired you to dream

Reach up and out into the world

Take care of your siblings, my little one

One day you will be the master of your own kingdom

I see you, wanting to play guns with the big boy’

Be mindful of those Bullet’s of the System

They never miss a target, with total precision

Replace pride with self-hate,

Replace generosity with greed

Replace forgiveness with vengeance

Replace loyalty with betrayal

Replace a mother’s milk

With a lethal dose of addiction

A lifetime affliction

Lock you up and chain you down

In the mental confines of your own prison

Give you a weapon to destroy,

Your own self-reflection

While in congregation, rejoice its blessing

Wrap a blindfold around your eyes

Can’t you see that’s your brother?

Raised you to sing God’s holy name

Instead you’re praising “paper”.

Singing,” Hallelujah! Your sistah’s a ho”

Hoping to make enough tricks

To turn, baby brown’s blue

Don’t quote me,‘if thine eyes offend thee pluck it out,’

I refuse to lose you to the shotgun of society

Designed to beat you down,

Crucify you,

Abuse you,

Humiliate you

Breeding seeds named anger and contempt

With multiple woman called lust

Reluctantly throwing,‘Pocket - change’ to your offspring

Playing dominoes, behind prison gates

Serving a life sentence,

For the crime, self- hate.

Whilst proudly proclaiming,

You’re responsible daddy

Sent you to school to become educated

You achieved a degree in materialism

How to buy a Mercedes Benz

Sport, Designer clothes,

Bling! Bling! Have a Diamond ring

Own a state-of the art music system

Wifey wants a mink,

She’ll look good in that,

While your riding her to

Buy now pay later heaven

Low wage

No problem

Use a credit card

You’re just a pawn in a centuries old game

Slave to the system designed to

Break you

Not make you

Got you believing

You’re thriving

Not surviving

While sweating a 60-hour week

Popped you a pill in spending

Instead of investing

Momma ponders for second,

Says child,“come help me in the kitchen”

Be mindful of those bullets of the system

They never miss a target!

They keep the masses fed,

But never teach them how to feed themselves.

Can you hear the echoes of my silent cry?

The system may treat me like I’m invisible

But this Momma isn’t going to the grave

Without being heard!

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Old August 10th, 2007, 10:04 PM   #2 (permalink)
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great write....very inspirational
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Old August 10th, 2007, 11:13 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I feel you... awesome poem.
 
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Old August 11th, 2007, 12:05 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Says a lot. I like it.
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Old August 15th, 2007, 02:11 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Old August 15th, 2007, 11:50 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Old August 17th, 2007, 04:13 PM   #7 (permalink)
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