Taking That Sweet Sip
Old July 22nd, 2007, 07:50 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Taking That Sweet Sip
If I could take this sip of love
Will it inebriate my thoughts
Would I crave the countless dreams
That love is made of?


Suppose I took a chance to enjoy the bouquet
of delightful and magnificent joy
Tasted the opulent warmth of bliss
And pleasure

Will this make me addicted to such a
Refreshing, cool and long languishing drink
Experiencing the freedom to exchange passion
Sharing,
Planning
And designing a future of unity.

I sense that thirst
My emotions are dry
Empty
Or yet
Like a glass that is half filled


One that needs to be filled to the brim
Because I need to share this drink of
Love


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Old July 28th, 2007, 08:36 PM   #2 (permalink)
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nice work....i luv'd the flow of this piece!
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Old November 17th, 2007, 04:37 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Lady, what You've written is a 'ThinkDrink" & i'm still sipping on it nearly 4 months after the fact.

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