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Old July 1st, 2007, 11:07 PM   #1 (permalink)
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We might have been something

Dedicated to the girl who's name I never got

wish I could have loved you



2001 crazy year 9-11 Aalyiah left the world

and I met you

I was a junior you just came to high school

but something about you I can't forget

It was only a crush because in the rush of life

I never got the chance to know you

We spoke a few times a short young connection

Yet thats all I have to remember you by

I talked to you for a minute the day before

You were taken

A smile a nod and I recall my left leg was shaken

I should have said something then

But I let you escape me and never saw you again

Because they took you from us

5/3 about a buck 'O' five pretty face lovely eyes

And a pair a thighs I wanted to ride

Hell you would have been my first and I might have

been yours too

But we weren't meant to be because they killed you on

your way to class that morning

You dad was in the drug game and you choose to stay

with him and you new baby brother

Sadly he own somebody some money and they

gunned down his Impala

I didn't know it was you when they made the annocement

over the P.A. that morning

I didn't know it was you when I rode past your street

after school and saw the police cars

I didn't know that was your body under the sheet

In a pool of blood and sadness

Another life to short in a world to cold and a love

That never will be

I dreamed of you lastnight and felt I had to tell you here

We might have been something

But if you where here I would have learned to never

Let a chance like you ever pass me again



With an almost possible love

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Old July 2nd, 2007, 10:09 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Sad, deep, and compelling poem. Did this actually happen or is your imagination this vivid?
 
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Old July 2nd, 2007, 10:44 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Yes it happened it was crazy after all these years for her to pop in my mind......most of what i write is based on some fact unless i'm just trying to be funny. If one of my poem made you laugh it was probably fiction but if they bring you close to tears............Yeah that was real.

This just shows how life can be taken away before you get a chance to live it so live as much as possible while you can.
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Old July 2nd, 2007, 01:07 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I just had a tear drop out of my eye. This is a sad story.
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