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Old July 1st, 2007, 03:30 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Am I a Hoe?

Am I a Hoe?



Call late in the evening
Nice gentle words as I enter
Passionate love making through out the night
Next morning……

get the **** out

I go home mad and rejected wondering what have I done wrong
I was just laying with her then she wants me out
Then she calls me back looking for something that’s strong
I come back same love same …..end

GET THE **** OUT

I’m a man and know ones bitch
I don’t come when I’m called
I don’t beg for nothing
But she has a control I want to fight

BUT CAN’T

What has she done to me
Have I NO dignity
Is she that good
Have the tables been turned

Tables been turned ….

I never…yes I have
I never…I did that too
I ne…I’ve done all the bad
But I already suffered the pain in the past

…….Do I like this

I keep coming back
I like making her want me
I feel good when she calls me
I enjoy the stroke

The deep hard ruff wet sweet nasty strokes

Her body feels so good against mine
Her words sound so sweet to my ears
She taste so good to me
She smells so sweet before AND after I do her

SO WHY THE HELL SHE HURTS ME AFTERWARDS

Wait hehe waaaiiit a minute
I shouldn’t feel this way about her
She’s not my girl or nothing
We just enjoy each other……

RIGHT???

She says she doesn’t want to complicate things
She was hurt to many times she wants it simple
She cried on my shoulder about her past
She tells me to make it better then when I do I need to LEAVE

Is she using me……wait I’m not going to be nobodies quick ****! Nobodies Hoe

I’m going to “Get up Stand Up Stand up For your rights” Hello…..

What’s up…
Hold on let me ask you something…
Ha-ha……
Yeah I’ll be there in a few

AND I’m DOING IT AGAIN

I hate the way she has me
I don’t want to be controlled by *****
**** should be running things here
But I think I love……oh ****.

**** IT I’LL BE HER HOE TONIGHT

I can’t fight it no more
She’s got me
Ain’t **** I can do
And I don’t want it to end

ANY WAY If she’s going to do that then it don’,.,…….,.,.,………………………………………………….
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Old July 1st, 2007, 08:47 AM   #2 (permalink)
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You aint no hoe but she is!!! Sorry, but I couldn't help it. This poem has my heart and I'm printing this out.
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Old July 2nd, 2007, 01:28 PM   #3 (permalink)
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This was too good! And true. Yes, the tables of time have turned and many a "players" are finding themselves on the opposite end of the game - the receiving end. But dudes, somehow, don't seem to mind being booty calls for women. I wonder why???
 
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Old July 2nd, 2007, 02:51 PM   #4 (permalink)
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look your not a hoe it sounds your falling and she is kicking you out to avoid herself getting emotionally attached, she may be working through her past.
Talk to her let her know all though you enjoy being with her, if you cant have the rest of her i.e. mind friendship and so forth then you may need to step back until she is ready. but in the end if she just wants you to come over and have sex she is a hoe.... if thats the case move on.
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Old July 2nd, 2007, 03:27 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I see this scenario for what it is: a booty-call for both. IMO!
 
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Old July 2nd, 2007, 03:41 PM   #6 (permalink)
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this is hilarious. great write. and NO you are not a hoe...you're just receiving the treatment that is usually reserved for women.
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Old July 3rd, 2007, 10:38 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Old July 3rd, 2007, 11:23 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Fiction or not, I love it! Its very real

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Old July 3rd, 2007, 03:32 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Interesting flip of the traditional coin. I like it.
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Old July 3rd, 2007, 03:45 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Nice one Jaboom! Maybe your skills in bed have blinded her to your other attributes...

What?! Just sayin...Lol!

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