Juicy Fruit

[l0nnieugene]

If only I could be YOUR pleasure presser
softly squeezing YOUR pleasing Grapes
from their round shape
Into fine wine that would wind its way thru
my taste buds enroute to giving me a body buzz
like noone else can or does.

My eyes empty envy n2 YOUR taffy Apple
caramel-covered carnal core.
They’re only too happy to grapple
with its sticky peeling, quickly feeling its gold-glazed skin
amazed when the delicious visage
does not fall free from the tall tree of sight
& that’s awesome because some
objects of my admiration try fabrication of nudity studiously attempting to avoid my vision’s peering, piercing incision that has no peerage.

thus far only a few words spoken yet I get soakin’ wet
& cold sweat softly rolls off me in droves
as YOUR eyes probe, wink @ & tease my fantasies
we’ve linked with ease so that even without intending to
YOU’ve had 1 or some sugar Plum purple circles spinning thru
my head, YOUR CookLook was like a threaded needle
that seemingly by habit stitched & enriched my seamless fabric
into a warm form-fitted garment of comfort
that hopefully one day both of us & those close to us
will wrap ourselves in

Teach me how to use the dripping hues of Peach speech.
I need to sit by the pit,
the seat of the seed @ YOUR feet
become a student @ the institute
of fruit freshness,
painting juice-induced portraits of orchards.
With YOU as my director
I will become a perfecter
of Peach Peace techniques
the art of tasting with0ut touching
which is how Ill spend my time away from YOU..

[Muze]

whoa. very sweet.

[afrocentric]

mmmm....this poem is TASTY and i like it...

[Sumyr]

Great write! If you ever publish a book of your poetry, I will be the first to purchase it and stand in line for a book signing. I would love to read a book of your published works on a cold, rainy winters day while sitting curled up in a warm blanket sipping on a French Vanilla & Caramel Latte.

[l0nnieugene]

Muse, Afrocentric, & Sumyr, U3Queens honor me merely by reading my wordwork. Further, You humble me by deigning 2post a reply 2them. That type of interaction is the fuel of my writing life. Thanx. i've been off the Board 4a while but i'm back & will be posting with a furry. My book is in the works.

[Celeste]

Originally Posted by l0nnieugene

My book is in the works.

Proud beyond proud to hear that.

[Evil_eyez]

very enticing and thought provoking ....i just lov'd the word play and your flow was amazing
excellent piece!!

[l0nnieugene]

Thanx. & there's nuthin' 'Evil' 'bout them Your 'eyez.' Obviously, that's just a figure of speech. i, belatedly, welcome U2the Board. i lQQk 4ward2 reading Your work.

[Evil_eyez]

Originally Posted by l0nnieugene

Thanx. & there's nuthin' 'Evil' 'bout them Your 'eyez.' Obviously, that's just a figure of speech. i, belatedly, welcome U2the Board. i lQQk 4ward2 reading Your work.

thank you

[Bishop]

Loving the imagery on this one...