CakeWalk
Old May 8th, 2007, 12:22 AM   #1 (permalink)
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CakeWalk

Players risk take.
Players make
a mistake
& conclude
that Your thronged/nude
body
is a layered cake
& all they need do
in order
2cake walk its borders
is to make talk
~~tossing frosting, offering softening
words;
run their false (fake) hood fingers
over Your baked goods
glaze & amaze
You with their brush-touch.

They, in order 2 occupy space,
&enter Your head/bed,
say they’re tender bred, taste
like ginger bread.
But Ur@ a level & mood
where You don’t abide Devil’s Food.
Your Angel’s Cake
knows their angle’s fake,
made of disobedient ingredients
that seek slicing desecration
of Your icing’s decoration.
They’re double layer, trouble players;
whereas, You’re composed,
with or without clothes,
of life’s reasoning power
not spice, seasoning & flour.
 
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Old May 8th, 2007, 03:46 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Brother Lonnie, this was delectably "sweet" - nice write! Betty Crocker doesn't have anything on you.
 
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Old May 11th, 2007, 07:45 AM   #3 (permalink)
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...nor i hope does Duncan Hines. i appreciate the time&attention You give 2my posts. & as far as i'm concerned, in the Dirty South, the Gritty North, the
Easy East or the Wild West, it's always Sumyrtime.
 
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