Replace these eyes...

[poeticasylum1]

When hearts depart
something dies.
No matter how hard you try,
compromise or comply.
Even our conversations falsify
intentions only feed pretentions
of the end game
neither one of us will be the same.
So I love you where are,
even its away me.
Now my prayers are to see,
differently on what the future holds for me.
Seven years slippin slowly out my grasp.
Seven years later I dwell on this past.
But presently I present my eyes in pain
wipe water endless from retina veins
Lord,
replace these eyes,
so I dont see the same
replace these eyes
so I wont place any blame.


Richard J Wright 2007

[Corals]

Very sad and emotional, yet very good.

[poeticasylum1]

Yeah...
its been rough for the kid.
real rough.

[Celeste]

Originally Posted by poeticasylum1

...replace these eyes,
so I dont see the same
replace these eyes
so I wont place any blame.


Richard J Wright 2007

This is incredibly moving, Brother poeticasylum. Made me catch my breath.

[BlackOpal63]

The pain of heartbreak is deep. I really, intensely felt this. Much peace to you poetic...