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March 27th, 2007, 04:48 PM
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Love's Fantasia
The droplets of dew trail slowly from my eyes
flowing freely, mindfully and seductive
The feeling of being at one with you makes my tears shine
Glistening as I savour the yearning of your touch
Hear the soft steady breath of your satisfied hunger
For me.
And as I unfold in your arms I cry
I cry because you cry.
Not from sadness,
But our feeling of togetherness.
Slowly, sailing, gliding and soaring
To heights of refreshing and sublime love.
Above the mountain of lust and to
the altitude of real true unified love.
The love connection is divine, perfect and true
Our contract of love is sealed with indulgence,
desire and longing.
We are soul mates, waiting in the wings to dance that merry dance
of everlasting adornment.
Your kiss is perfect
Your touch is celestial
Your words seem surreal, but yet lucid and sure.
This is my sanctuary.
My state of fulfillment
And....
yet now, my tears change
To disenchantment
The moment of love with you has ended
As I awake with a sigh...
My pillow wet with soft tears.
You were never here
And I never wanted this dream
To end.
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March 27th, 2007, 04:54 PM
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Oh, I thought this was a poem about the singer Fantasia.....  Still beautiful nonetheless. |
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March 27th, 2007, 05:11 PM
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 I know she is a great singer, but I doubt whether I could create a poem about her. Hey, she is very talented.
And I'm glad you liked the poem too.  |
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March 30th, 2007, 01:34 AM
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Lovely work, Sister Opal.
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March 31st, 2007, 10:00 AM
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Lovely work, Sister Opal.
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Thank you Celestial Sister.
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March 31st, 2007, 10:47 AM
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Methinks you have been in my head, in a past lifetime with me or something...
I have been here.
Good stuff.
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March 31st, 2007, 10:59 AM
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Originally Posted by poeticasylum1
Methinks you have been in my head, in a past lifetime with me or something...
I have been here.
Good stuff.
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Possibly Kindred Spirits no doubt?
You are so kind.
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March 31st, 2007, 11:25 PM
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[quote=BlackOpal63;135216]The droplets of dew trail slowly from my eyes...
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April 1st, 2007, 05:11 PM
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 Much thanks to you. I am flattered..
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