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February 1st, 2007, 12:29 AM
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Bloom
Personal treasure.
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"What is your Quest?"
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February 1st, 2007, 10:54 AM
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Ahhhhh, isn't love beautiful. It is the only thing that can "bloom" in this bitterly cold weather. :) Beautiful write - Thanks for sharing!
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February 1st, 2007, 11:27 AM
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Such simplistic yet touching imagery. I love the way you form your words, Its as if I can see love happening..... : )
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Originally Posted by Celeste
Bloom
I am moving toward an abyss
Eyes brimming, two oceans at the brink
And then I find you
Like a shade-tree in bloom
Each leaf and tendril seems beautiful to me
And love is waiting at the root
And I want to take shelter with you
Let me dry my eyes so that I may see you as you really are
The light from a nameless star travels through your branches
And I lean against you as a new moon shines
For both of us.
copyright 2007 by Celeste
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Love how you put this down, It makes you wanna get all warm and cuddily with cocoa.  :)
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February 10th, 2007, 01:46 AM
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Thanks for all the fantastic feedback. :)
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February 10th, 2007, 07:42 PM
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Originally Posted by Celeste
Bloom
I am moving toward an abyss
Eyes brimming, two oceans at the brink
And then I find you
Like a shade-tree in bloom
Each leaf and tendril seems beautiful to me
And love is waiting at the root
And I want to take shelter with you
Let me dry my eyes so that I may see you as you really are
The light from a nameless star travels through your branches
And I lean against you as a new moon shines
For both of us.
copyright 2007 by Celeste
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Celeste, one of elegant and passionate prose. I think this is your best work, thoroughly impressed. |
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Now..I truly liked this. It was so refreshingly sweet. Beautiful words Celeste.
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April 1st, 2007, 11:33 PM
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Gracious thanks, Sister Opal. 
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wow. this is beautiful celeste. wonderful write.
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Warm thanks, Sister Muze.
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